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October 16, 2014

Mysterious Calendar

Mysterious Calendar
By Deska Aulia Sari
In a small town lived a small family in their old house. This family consisted of father, mother, son and a daughter. The father named James was crazy about collecting unique things. Mrs. James was crazy about shopping. The 9-years-old daughter named Ann was a genius person. Beside the 14-years-old Son named Brandy was a naughty boy.
On a very hot day, Mr. James in brown coat hunted for the unique thing in an old shop which he never seen before. He opened the wood door. How happy he was when he saw that place full of many old unique things covered with dust. He rang the bell three times. And then an old man in black suit came forward to him. “Welcome in my shop sir, you can get anything what you want.” he said. “Of course, thank you”, James answered. He walked coming close to every unique things. Finally he chose the old electric calendar. Although, it appearance was so poor in quality but it still worked.

In their house, Brandy was disturbing Ann as usual. Brandy was so jealous with his little sister. He hoped his sister never born, so his parent could totally care about him. “I’m coming.” James screamed immediately. Ann and Brandy ran into him, “Horey father coming!” both of them screamed. “Oh ... my dear please stay away from me, I bring this one. Please don’t disturb me!” He said. Brandy blamed his sister as the cause of this condition. Their father didn’t care again with them.
At night, when everybody was sleeping, Brandy walked to the father’s bedroom. He stole his father’s calendar. “Because of this stupid calendar, now father don’t care about me anymore.” he whispered. Then, he changed the calendar format. He placed back it in the father’s desk.
In the morning, Brandy woke up, then he took a bath also went to the school. But, there was something strange. He felt this day same with yesterday. From woke up, got bad mark in the examination until found his father brought a new calendar. In the next day, he found that he still was 13 years old. Six days later he found he was 8 year old. He became panic since he couldn’t find his sister. He asked his father “father, where is Ann?” “Ann? Is she your girl friend?” His father said. Brandy just realized that the time ran back, it was the reason why his father didn’t know about Ann, she had not born yet.
Brandy tried to think how to solve this serious problem he had made. He must find that electric calendar, but now he was just 8-yeasr-old boy. He missed his little sister. He was so regret.
Brandy came out from his house. He saw his grandpa who had dead 6 years ago was sitting in front of his house. “Hi grandpa, what are you doing here?” brandy said. “I’m enjoy the scenery in here, why you so confused my dear?” grandpa asked. “Yeah, I’m confused about the date.” He answered. “You can check it in my calendar my dear, it is in my bedroom.” Grandpa said. Before Brandy went to the grandpa’s bedroom, he gave a big hug to his beloved grandpa who he missed so much.
How surprise Brandy, when he saw the electric calendar in the grandpa’s desk which he was looked for. He changed the date in that calendar. Brandy just realized that his grandpa’s bedroom was became his father’s bedroom in the future. And the calendar’s position same with when he put it after he changed that calendar format on that night. Brandy promised would take care his little sister. Finally, he back to the real date. Brandy was 14 years old. And then, he gave a big hug to his little sister who was watching Tv. Ann just saw at him confusedly.
Finally, Brandy thought if he must destroy that mysterious calendar. Then, he walked to the center of the town. In there he saw an old shop which he never seen before. Finally he sold it in there. After he came out from that shop, the tall man in brown coat walked forward to that shop.



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The soldier confused to choose between two doors in front of him. His choice would be determining his life. He walked up to the right door. Then, he took hold of the door’s handle but he didn’t open it. He walked up to the left door and opened it immediately. How surprise he was when he saw a very huge lion inside the door. The lion looked very cruel. The soldier went back step by step but his eyes still observed the lion intently. Beside, the lion walked up to the soldier step by step, then ran to him.  The soldier was very afraid. He ran in the edge of the Colloseum with the lion ran behind him. If it could be count, they ran for about 50 times. Then, they were in a big struggle in the middle of the Colloseum. The lion throw it paw right in the soldier’s cheek. The poor soldier flew also hit the wall then fell head first in the ground. After saw a tragic condition, the princes with her brave took apart in this big struggle. She throw some knife she was taken from the kitchen in to the lion, however there was no knife hit the lion. The princes changed the lion’s attention from the poor soldier. It tried to pounce on the princes. Because of the power of love, the soldier woke up then took his long sword. He stubbed the lion with his sword right in the lion’s heart. Finally the cruel big lion died. Both the soldier and the princes cried then they made a big hug. All spectators including the King were compassion. He gave bless to them. Suddenly, a beautiful woman in white dress came out from the right door then he made a very nice smile. The King fell in love with her in his first sight. How surprised he was when he realized that the woman was his ex-girl friend. Finally both the father and the princes married their couple in the same time. And they lived happily ever after in their own palace.

October 02, 2014

The Long Process in Writing



The Long Process in Writing

 
Writing is a bit difficult activity for me. Not only the problem about what should I write, but also the problem about my confusedness toward many rules in writing. But actually there are some steps to make it easier for me. I got it from my beautiful lecturer, Mrs. Zulfa.  There are four steps I have to pass in writing. They are brainstorming, drafting, finalizing and proofreading. Brainstorming is one of the steps which I like very much. This step requires me to think base on my point of view. I like imagined anything from very general up to very specific detail base on topic. This method very helps me to collect ideas that available with the topic. The next step is drafting. To start this step, we must have willingness to do it. Once I don’t feel like starting writing, my paragraph will not finish. People said that it is difficult to start than continuous. I totally agree with its quote. So, In order to pass this step, I force my self to write at least one or two sentences. Then, the third step is finalizing. After finishing writing the paragraph, this is time for me to make sure that I don’t make any mistakes in grammar, punctuation, diction, coherence and cohesion. In the last step, I need the other people to become a proof reader. As, the process correcting my paragraph by the other people called proof reading. I also must selective to choose people to become my proof reader if I want my work to be better than before. Although must pass a very long steps in writing, but I am so proud if I have done my own paragraph. I’ll be very happy, If It can be publish.

September 25, 2014

Semarang State University



Semarang State University (SSU) is a state University located in the capital city of Central Java province. According to Okezone.com, SSU has been awarded as the 4th the most favorite campus in Indonesia this year. There are eight faculties in SSU, it consist of education faculty, languages and art faculty, social science faculty, economic faculty, etc. SSU is declared as University of Conservation since 2000. One of the rules that support the conservation program is no motorbike and cars in the campus area. The purpose in this program is to decrease the air pollution. SSU has more that 40.000 students which come from various cities. SSU is famous as the green campus, since there are many big trees around the campus. To support the conservation program, students are expected to minimize the paper using. SSU also has beautiful large park which can be use as the sport area. In the evening there are many people doing exercise. There are also many people who enjoy the scenery.

January 17, 2014

Using “If” clause present

DESKA AULIA SARI

ENGLISH EDUCATION/1
SEMARANG STATE UNIVERSITY
UsingIf clause present
I wish someone would pick me up to go back to my hometown. In fact, I will go back to there alone. How lucky I am, Maulida my classmate will accompany me to go back to Banyumas my beloved place. Because of the bad weather, we just wish the weather was nice on December 19th . We are confused to choose the public transportation. Finally we decide to back to Banyumas by travel. Using travel is very safety I guess, because we just waiting in our boarding house and travel will pick us up. Beside that, we wish could get snack and a bottle of water. 

Truer situation
(verb-0/s)
Wish
(verb-ed)
If-clause
(If ... verb-ed, ... would verb)
©      I don’t have money.
©      I am ill.
©      I wish I had money.
©      I wish I were not ill.
©      If I had money, I would go shopping.
©      If I were not ill, I would be out.